For the second activity on day 2 was we made a poem about imagining that we were Neil Armstrong and describing how you felt when you first set foot on the moon. This activity was simple and quick to complete.
Greetings Karlos This is a really good blog post for the activity 2 day 2. The thing that I liked about you post is how you have wrote an amazing poem imagining you being then one to step on the moon. Other then that this is a really good blog and keep up the good work.
Hi Karlos, this is Mrs Collins from Manaiakalani and I'll be commenting on blogs over term break. Well done on posting and participating in the SLJ this year. I really like the poem you created about walking on the moon - would you REALLY like to walk on the moon? I'm not too sure I'd like the journey there... Keep blogging, and commenting on others, to increase your chance of winning one of the awesome prizes and to keep up your learning over the school break!
Well done on completing your Summer Learning Journey task. I really liked your DLO and how you presented your poem. Your poem is also really nice. Its nice to see you doing the task on the Summer Learning Journey Programme. Was this task easy or hard?
Hi Karlos, I liked how you described your experiences as worth it, and that your friends and family will be proud. I also liked how you included a countdown. If you actually could would would want to fly to the moon, would you want to?
Greetings Karlos
ReplyDeleteThis is a really good blog post for the activity 2 day 2. The thing that I liked about you post is how you have wrote an amazing poem imagining you being then one to step on the moon.
Other then that this is a really good blog and keep up the good work.
Hi Karlos, this is Mrs Collins from Manaiakalani and I'll be commenting on blogs over term break. Well done on posting and participating in the SLJ this year. I really like the poem you created about walking on the moon - would you REALLY like to walk on the moon? I'm not too sure I'd like the journey there... Keep blogging, and commenting on others, to increase your chance of winning one of the awesome prizes and to keep up your learning over the school break!
ReplyDeleteGreetings Karlos
ReplyDeleteWell done on completing your Summer Learning Journey task. I really liked your DLO and how you presented your poem. Your poem is also really nice. Its nice to see you doing the task on the Summer Learning Journey Programme. Was this task easy or hard?
Great Job Karlos!
Hi Karlos,
ReplyDeleteI liked how you described your experiences as worth it, and that your friends and family will be proud. I also liked how you included a countdown. If you actually could would would want to fly to the moon, would you want to?