narrative hook

My L.I is to Plan a hook.

                              

      

For writing I had to plan a hook for my story.I learnt what is a good hook for my narrative.I used one onomatopoeia it was the word Roar!I learnt by thinking of what I was going to write fo my hook and then writing it down on a google document.

                            

Roar! One gloomy halloween there were two kids that loved to play by the  swamp. There names were jack and jill.Jack is ten years old and he is a talented kid who wanted to be an acrobatic when he grows up.Jill Is Jack's step sister she is 9 years old she wants to be an police officer when she grows up.